Revisions after receiving feedback

After receiving feedback, we found that most of it was positive. However, with the useful criticism we were given, we took it on board to make our opening sequence better:

• After receiving constructive criticism on behalf of the clarity of the opening sequence, we had a group discussion and we said that we are going to show more continuity in our scenes instead of just showing a 5-10 second shot of a character in different locations, we concluded that this would be too random and confusing. 

• Also, we talked about how we didn't make clear how our titles will appear and when. So we came up with the idea of integrating our titles into the actual footage by fading them onto the corners of the screen, which will portray and link in with the idea of the enigmatic character being spotted in the corners and edges of the frame. We thought that would be effective and emphasise the mysteriousness of the opening sequence and also give us more time to show actual footage instead of applying the titles on a boring background.