Audience Feedback after delivering the pitch

Questionnaire

What is your favourite feature of our opening sequence and why?

Is there anything you doubt will work?

Does our idea sound appropriate to the genre and why?

What about our idea sounds engaging to the audience?

What would you change?

Do you think it will make sense in the 2-minute time frame given?

Audience's favourite features:

• The 'hostage' narration 
• Intriguing film title
• Several shots of the hostage seeing this mysterious character in different locations

Did the audience think the idea was appropriate to the genre:

• Yes, appropriate conventions. For example, the idea of an enigma

What ideas sound engaging:

• The psychological elements 
• Unanswered questions
• Voiceover

Will it make sense in 2 minutes:

• Yes, work hard to make it comprehensive and not too confusing

"Is there anything you doubt will work?"

One group said that a lot of work will have to be put in to make it comprehensive and another said that the shots of the protagonists face may be unclear and repetitive. Also, someone asked how our kidnap would look real.

"What would you change?"

One group said not to show too much walking around and another group weren't sure about how the titles will be presented and that we made that factor unclear.